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~ All I want ~ by SCIFIJACKRABBIT ~ All I want ~ by SCIFIJACKRABBIT
Art, concept and Characters Jack Stevenson 2013

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Not quite vent art... but not far from it... just me trying to make something serious and emotional... romantic even.. ... just in that mood ya know =u='' (quite proud of it really)

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First of all i must say, its quite obius to notice that the art work its made on some kind of pencil and that is one of the weaks points that i want to treat on this critique.
I like your trace, maybe you should work more on the sharpnes on the lines to give some movement and determenation to the scene, but as i was saying before is that you can notice that is worked in pencil, that i dont know if it done on porpuse, because you can see that there are parts that are not clean before starting to paiting with black.
The second point its that i cant really define your OCs face, i know that the angle its tring to show him facing down, but even knowing that i think you are missing an ear on the O. If he is faceing 80 degress to the bed you at least should see a part of his left ear.
The third point that i want to talk about its the shape of the bed when they are lying there. Mabye adding some shadows you can persive the deep they are at on thg bed.
Other than that just details but you can easily see that the vision in the scene its there, you only need to dedicate a bit more on the details and the technique. I also think that thg artwork reflects the intension and has a good impact to the viewers giving them the feels of that moment. I personally like the artwork and i hope you can take this critique as a punch foward to imrove smal things. I really see foward to furry-anthro and i love ths kind of scene made by you. Please forgive me if i wrote or minspelled some words i a currently using my phone to write this review, tomorrow i'll try to fix most of the gramatical errors.
P.D: check out squeedge moster if you are interested in a harder and sarper trace, also if you like graphitty you can check out aryz a spanish artist that makes huge art on the streets at barcellona.
P.D.D: as you probably noticed my national language is not english, sorry about that again :c
P.D.D.D: im really looking foward your art and music, keep the hard work!
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tawnykit1999 Mar 22, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nawh Jaq your too adorable <'3

I love this still its so cewt XDD
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SCIFIJACKRABBIT Mar 25, 2014  Student Artist
ksjdgjsdlgv

/)////(\
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tawnykit1999 Apr 9, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
asdfghjkl >w<
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Studio-Kyru Mar 16, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love passionate poses this is really awesome!
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SCIFIJACKRABBIT Mar 16, 2014  Student Artist
same and thanks ;P
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Studio-Kyru Mar 16, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
you're very welcome !! ;P
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SwedenSpeedway Mar 13, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is actually fucking beautiful in so many ways and senses.

Be more than proud.
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SCIFIJACKRABBIT Mar 13, 2014  Student Artist
xD Thanks
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DRFloofnstache Feb 23, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is simply intoxicating. Wish I had someone to hold like that. Very beautiful.
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SCIFIJACKRABBIT Mar 2, 2014  Student Artist
pfft same man xD 

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