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CJRFM 12 by SCIFIJACKRABBIT CJRFM 12 by SCIFIJACKRABBIT
CJRFM and Related Characters SCIFIJACKRABBIT // TEAM-HAPPI-BOMB // CJRFM

Art Jack Stevenson 2012

TUMBLR//@ [link]
YOUTUBE//@ [link]

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Go read more of the comic @ [link]

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Finally... some completely new content ;P

enjoy the cliff hanger >w>

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Comments, faves and crits are appreciated very much!
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This is not just for this page but for the intro/promo chapter as a whole.

First, Frank's dialogue. Rich vocabulary and sense of expression, there's a strong English flavour in his diction melding both earnest sharpness and sick sense of humour.

Art-style... awesomeness. What more can be said? Also putting some seconndary cameos alongside stylish random ones make for a sweet quencher.

Glimpses into both sides of Neo-London is brief yet telling, and merged with rich dialogue and unique lettering (Comic Sans & Japanese TrueType are cliches that need to be refined or retired) make for a very powerful experience. Even the musical elements are held back, only starting things off with a vague bang. (And just a Sonic boom at that)

Cons are in a messed-up, dystopian view of modern UK complete with gritty architecture with waste [link] even moreso than「Dr. Who」or the recent「Sherlock」series. The condescending approach to "hoodied ones" is disquieting although accurate to Frank's folly & initial prejudice. There are some inconsistencies with the character arts.

Still, this is a powerful example of introductory storytelling with a futuristic world unlike any other. Definitely geared up for CJRFM's debut and further battles!

*cue Pendulum's Showdown* :cd:
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:icondeustisofshadows:
DeustisOfShadows Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
What're they playing? Owo
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SCIFIJACKRABBIT Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2012  Student Artist
most likely some Drum and Bass >w> [link]
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:icondeustisofshadows:
DeustisOfShadows Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Aye, Good stuff. >w> Not nearly as "hooligan-ish" as I suspected though...He must be a real square cat if he can't handle a little helping of DnB. I'd hate to imagine how he'd react to agrrotech. X3
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SCIFIJACKRABBIT Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2012  Student Artist
Haha! there not into any of that stuff >w< These kids mainly rep UK sounds like Drum and Bass, Jungle, Garage ect ect ;P
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:icondeustisofshadows:
DeustisOfShadows Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
:roll: Still a nice break from all the WUBstep fans...
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:iconscifijackrabbit:
SCIFIJACKRABBIT Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2012  Student Artist
oh they play abit of Dubstep. but nothing like Skrillex x3 [link]
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:icondeustisofshadows:
DeustisOfShadows Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Not too bad. I dunno...Dubstep's just a little too...slow and soft for me. :/ Then again, there are exeptions, and that was actually pretty refreshing and impressive. ^w^

e_e Plus, I bet if I ever brought anything, ears would melt. [link] [link] [link]
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NickinAmerica Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2012
Aaaahhh, I remember brainstorming with you about how this scene could play out. All I can hear now is this. XD [link]

These pages are really starting to pile up, now. Great work so far.
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SCIFIJACKRABBIT Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2012  Student Artist
ah indeed I remember! ;p

and Thanks man :3
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ChuMasu Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Moon: -Is in the hall way as frank runs by- I wouldn't go up there if I where you.
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PumpkinQueen-3090 Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2012  Student General Artist
I realy love your comic , it's very well done , GREAT history. :)
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SCIFIJACKRABBIT Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012  Student Artist
Thankyou very much :3
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Auxilon Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2012
Awesome! Been waiting for page 12 for like, forever! Fantastic work once again, Jaq!
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SCIFIJACKRABBIT Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012  Student Artist
Thanks! next page comin up soon!
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Blindseer95 Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2012
Moooore~
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:iconscifijackrabbit:
SCIFIJACKRABBIT Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012  Student Artist
Sooooon~
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Trash-meta Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2012  Student Writer
Of course it would be your possibly worst mistake ever made Frank, and you will regret it. :D
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SCIFIJACKRABBIT Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2012  Student Artist
Haha XD
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NintendoMarioFan Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
DAMN CLIFFHANGERS XD
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SCIFIJACKRABBIT Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2012  Student Artist
:iconrapefacewoodyplz:
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LARS777 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2012
Busted!!XD
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SCIFIJACKRABBIT Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2012  Student Artist
:iconlooolplz:
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LARS777 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2012
My thoughts exactly!!
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Aerospine Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2012
Hehe this is gonna be good xD. Also *has my mp3 on* "what's this guys problem?"
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PiNKHEADSETS Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
yes, it is a cliff hanger, JACK >:L andn I'm about to suicide myself.
lolwat
I liiiiiiiiike :3 I love Frank's eyes in that panel and the text is so aweshum x3
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SCIFIJACKRABBIT Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2012  Student Artist
Thankyou! :3
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mech2159 Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I thought it was the guy sitting down on the couch plugging something in at first. Then i looked again going backwards to find out there were two different situation.
Other then that I like
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SCIFIJACKRABBIT Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2012  Student Artist
Sorry about that. lolz

Overall I like the composition of it though... even if it is kinda hard to understand =w=
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mech2159 Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
from the comments it looks like I was the only one who got thrown off anyway. keep it up
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NinjaHeart Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2012
"Stampede of retarded elephants..." You certainly have colorful similes. xD
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SCIFIJACKRABBIT Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2012  Student Artist
haha Thanks X3
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canine-jackrabbit Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
just out of curiosity how long does it take you to draw,ink,and colour one of these pages because these are really good i'd imagine it takes some time but you've been posting these quite frequently so i got a bit curious
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SCIFIJACKRABBIT Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2012  Student Artist
Takes about 3/4 hours to draw it. then about 5/6 hours to colour... all depends on how complex the page is to be honest =w=

I actually had these 12 pages ready to upload for about 3 weeks now... I had to do them for college. im also in the process of uploading my sketchbook [link] which is just over 100 pages long so thats about 40 up coming uploads to come of that =w= :3

anyway all the new comic pages from here on is completely new material =w=

~ Jack
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canine-jackrabbit Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
a project for college huh? well thats pretty awesome sadly i cant post my projects because i put in my birthdate wrong so i cant post my 18a content but i just have to wait a bit longer. but your work is incredible and very professionally done for a small critique ^w^
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SCIFIJACKRABBIT Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2012  Student Artist
haha thankyou very mooch! =3=
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MangaFreakJesus101 Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2012
i just cant help reading this in a Max Payne voice!
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SCIFIJACKRABBIT Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2012  Student Artist
LOL XD
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MangaFreakJesus101 Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2012
:iconlolguyplz:
Wait a second...
He is a detective.
Has a Max Payne style monolouge.
Makes absurd comparisons of the situation around him.
Goes head first in to trouble.
Could he also... DO BULLET TIME??? :iconinglipplz::iconmegustaplz:
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:iconsomeoneabletofindana:
Look at dat msucles he has, those teens will regret disturbing him :XD:
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niftykoala Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
This does not bode well. :O
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SCIFIJACKRABBIT Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2012  Student Artist
bode?

also long time no see haha! ;P
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niftykoala Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Rumors of my placement in a mental ward were purely fabrication. :O

Life got crazy for a bit..It's getting better now. :)
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SCIFIJACKRABBIT Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2012  Student Artist
oooooooooooooooookay -nods slowly-
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niftykoala Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
heh heh :D
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SirSSJacob Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2012  Hobbyist
greaqt job
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SCIFIJACKRABBIT Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2012  Student Artist
greaqt comment :iconsexyseriouscatplz: :heart:
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SirSSJacob Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2012  Hobbyist
my bad LOL, I was taping to fast :)
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