Page 20! woot! and to celebrate here's one of the all time fave girls making her debut! (and Scrunchy too who I havn't actually drawn untill now.. so I guess thats a more important debut xD xD xD
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Comments, faves and crits are appreciated very much!!
I like the way the comic is going, but their are some grammatical errors and sometimes the text is a little difficult to read. The characters are interesting, but the plot doesn't seem very evident. Almost like it's being smothered by boobs and butts. Which is not a bad thing, but it shouldn't be an excuse for little mistakes. I would continue to work on improving your inking and your color variation, even if only one panel is colored.
Colors 6/10
Inking 8/10
Background 7/10
Shading 9/10
Style 10/10
Text 4/10
Emotion 8/10
Lines 8/10
Impact 9/10
Vision 10/10
Originality 6/10
Technique 7/10
I like the way the comic is going, but their are some grammatical errors and sometimes the text is a little difficult to read. The characters are interesting, but the plot doesn't seem very evident. Almost like it's being smothered by boobs and butts. Which is not a bad thing, but it shouldn't be an excuse for little mistakes. I would continue to work on improving your inking and your color variation, even if only one panel is colored.
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