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CJRFM and Related Characters TEAM HAPPI BOMB // CJRFM

Art Jack Stevenson 2012

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"Really proud of this page! The little psychotic wide eyed dude on the right I really like! been planning his character for a while now.. calling him "Mayhem" >;3" The other two im not sure for names. Ill decided later..

Comments, faves and crits are appreciated very much!
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Its really nice that your actually taking your time in your work to remake it into something for the public to read about. I like the look, how it feels towards readers of these few pages. Its nice, but the concept seams far fetched and maybe some public might not even read it, but I'm sure they will take an interest in it. Even though the first comic is yet to be finished of this series, I'm sure you'll make allot in your future ahead of you. Keep up the good work and let your imagination run to your arts my good man.
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this art is brilliant in meany ways and effects on the characters and style of drawing is something to marvel at, and I love the way you have managed to crate the atmosphere of your scenes and locations, as the techniques you have used have created a grate impact on how you want the reader to feel and the originality is a massive contribution to this comic ^_^)
adding color to thees pagers is something as well, it helps to create a grater complexion and strengthens vision which is important to, I know I'm only ranting on how grate your art is, and I know that there are and will always be for all artest room for improvement, but in this picture I can see nothing (IMHO) that would such improvements ^_^) pleas keep the art rolling.
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alyvamphedgehoggirl Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013  Student General Artist
So basically it's like Brookyln, New York over there. xD
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SCIFIJACKRABBIT Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013  Student Artist
A little yeah.. ;P
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xilethegunner Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Dangit! Quit using fancy shmancy hoidy toidy tipsy topsy hippy hoppy flippy floppy english slang that I'm too American to understand! I've had to visit wikipedia a lot after reading this.
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SCIFIJACKRABBIT Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2012  Student Artist
HAHAHAHA!!! sorry man xD besides the slang I hope your enjoying it lol
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Scottman23 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Lopez: Mayhem....the school bully back home, its strange id run into him at this point.............
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krocialblack Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I want to be part of this so bad. Part of the rough neck crowd! :icongangstaplz:
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SlamJamSam Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Gee I sure would like to go to Engla-

-chavs-

Oh, right..
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SCIFIJACKRABBIT Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012  Student Artist
:iconlooolplz:
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SlamJamSam Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Sam uses "Give Alchohol"

It's super effective!
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awesomemanftw Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2012
What is a neet? -An American
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SCIFIJACKRABBIT Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2012  Student Artist
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awesomemanftw Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2012
Thanks. We call those leeches.
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13SugarShady Featured By Owner May 14, 2012
Dude, you should name tha crazy wide-eyed guy Mykel Mayhem ! ;o;
Plus i love the way tha buildings are drawn in tha first panel </3 ~
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SCIFIJACKRABBIT Featured By Owner May 18, 2012  Student Artist
Thankyou ;P
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goshy11 Featured By Owner May 6, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
neat and epic as always
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Lightclaws Featured By Owner May 5, 2012  Student Artist
I really like the comic already.
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PiNKHEADSETS Featured By Owner May 5, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
love it! :O love the character name idea BTW! :3
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llCreatorll Featured By Owner May 5, 2012  Hobbyist
OMG KEISHA IS SO HAWT :iconwantplz:

Loving the detail brother! Keep it up!
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p4rtOFthePr0blem Featured By Owner May 3, 2012
*American here

the hell is a "Chav"?
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SCIFIJACKRABBIT Featured By Owner May 3, 2012  Student Artist
British slang term for troublesome youths. often adopting a gang-estique life style. The word actually stands for "Council Housing and Violence" .. its more of a media steriotype than an actual thing. Just because someone listens to Drum and Bass and wears Adidas doesn't make them a Chav. But apparently it swings that way non the less ;)

~ Jack
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LARS777 Featured By Owner May 2, 2012
Epic page bro.
You're topping you're overall epicness level X3
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:iconauxilon:
Auxilon Featured By Owner May 2, 2012
Keisha looks like a hooker ;P
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titanvicegrip101 Featured By Owner May 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Amazing work! ^w^ I'm loving this comic!!
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NintendoMarioFan Featured By Owner May 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Hooray for new page =D
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KuwabaraVSYusuke Featured By Owner May 2, 2012
cool :D
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Zegera Featured By Owner May 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I like it so far, kinda reminds me of one of the colonies in my book.
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KristinaStoud Featured By Owner May 2, 2012
Keishaaa >: D
I'm just loving these updated pages so much. Do want :iconamgtouchplz:
I really like how you made the middle panel with the gang looking guys all torn up and popping out. It really adds to the mood of that part.
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Sonic-Freak42 Featured By Owner May 2, 2012  Student Filmographer
Does this even need a critique?
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Aerospine Featured By Owner May 2, 2012
Very impressive work ^^ very nice work.
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Trash-meta Featured By Owner May 2, 2012  Student Writer
The coloring to the comic has really outdone the black and white pages, I especially enjoy the scary dog characters here. Who knows, they be members of the Danger Dogz, like Keisha! :D
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Trash-meta Featured By Owner May 2, 2012  Student Writer
they might be
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soldier107 Featured By Owner May 2, 2012
DO MORE!! Its damn good!
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DANJAMESV Featured By Owner May 2, 2012   Filmographer
love ur stylee
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spay1100 Featured By Owner May 2, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Progression pays off, keep it up man!
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