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Art Jack Stevenson 2011

commence project CJRFM.

Cover for my upcoming comic / graphic novel. Hope it sets a good example for whats to come ^w^

For more information regarding CJRFM check this out [link]

Comments and Critiques would be loverly! :heart:

Thanks! ~ JaQ

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:iconfallenangelgm:
Truly a sexy and daring picture, I say.

I love how you were able to combine different tones of black, the colors white and blue into this piece. It gives a good and mysterious vibe onto the picture and it makes you want to see the story.

The character are well done and I must the the character in the middle leaves a good impact when it comes to sex-appeal. Well done on that part. The other characters are also appealing also, but I believe they could use more impact.

Overall, great job and keep up the good work on your part!
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:iconhopethewolf1018:
i honestly have nothing to complain about other than maybe pulling her face forward a bit, towards the camera. i love that this picture is not to colorful to the eye, and that the back-round is like a comic book. i am just amazed at how you do things sometimes. the pop of her "RAWR" shirt really makes her boozums stand out! and i like the way that all of your characters are not super model skinny, like luna. luna is my second fav character the first is toni! :) and thanks for allowing me to critique your art... im a big fan!
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:iconjaydi-man:
Jaydi-Man Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Looks nice -\\\\-
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:iconsedrico:
Sedrico Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Hot Damn !!!
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:iconscifijackrabbit:
SCIFIJACKRABBIT Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Student Artist
x3
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:iconjames-dark-blue-wolf:
Whoa awesome!
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:iconmagicallymaidofages:
magicallymaidofages Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
THIS is really good! Keep up the awesoem wrk!
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:icondarkhedgehog23:
DarkHedgehog23 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2012
after looking at this comic finally XD

I have to say its Very COOL ^^
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:iconscifijackrabbit:
SCIFIJACKRABBIT Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2012  Student Artist
Thankyou very much ;P
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:icondarkhedgehog23:
DarkHedgehog23 Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012
welcome^^
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:iconcollege-dropout:
College-Dropout Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2012
Its so refreshing to see a GOOD none inked comic! I LOVE it! I'm working on one myself, and you inspired me a bit!
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:iconscifijackrabbit:
SCIFIJACKRABBIT Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2012  Student Artist
Thankyou very much! >w< Feel free to check out the newest page! [link] I think ive improved a whole lot since this old thing >w>

Thanks again ;P
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SlamJamSam Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I want this comic in a local comic book store one day. Hehe...


I'd buy it under a second.
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:iconscifijackrabbit:
SCIFIJACKRABBIT Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012  Student Artist
awwh thanks man ^w^
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:iconslamjamsam:
SlamJamSam Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012  Student Digital Artist
No prob :3
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:iconpumpkinqueen-3090:
PumpkinQueen-3090 Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2012  Student General Artist
sooooooooooooo nice. 0.0
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:icongunslinger5678:
Gunslinger5678 Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2012  Student Artist
Even though I dont look at furry ravers this is epic.

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:iconscifijackrabbit:
SCIFIJACKRABBIT Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2012  Student Artist
thankyou very much. These sort of ravers arnt about neon colours and glosticks and stuff lol.

~ Jack
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:icongunslinger5678:
Gunslinger5678 Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2012  Student Artist
Ha I got ya, hey want to be friends?


:iconquestionplz:
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dragon14253 Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2012
nice picture
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Nekluna Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2011
A long comment from me, beware heheh:

A pretty nice front for the comic.
The girl/lady in the center of it is the best part. Her proportions are really good and mature. Bust, legs and hips match each others well. You should have drawn her right eye, now it looks weird when the bangs arent completely covering the place where the right eye is supposed to be. The same "flaw" can be seen on the dog to the right of her. The puller to the zip is very big and seem heavy. Is it really supposed to be like that? In that case it surely must be treated like some sort of chain within the pop-punk-rock culture or something. I hope the cat girl/lady is just giving fanservice on the frontpage, having the same dress style in public wouldn't be good. Would probably just lead to laughs, mobbing or even sexual violation of her no matter which side of New London she lives in.
The design of the characters eye-globes has unusual visual styles, although they are quite simple. Some has a black line to be their eye pattern while others has like white round eye-globes, which is more common to see. I think they would have been better with some brighter coloring though.
Not sure about your reason to go with gray, black and white colors and blue. It can be a matter of saving time and work. However, the tree basic colors cant outmatch colors from the rainbow palette.
But if you intend to fill the comic with dark, depressing, violent, conflict filled, unstable and unfair set of feelings , then the more basic set of gray, black and white is recommended.
You do need to remember if you intend to do a comic with a very dark plot, that doing one is like walking on thin ice. It is very easy to make it too complicated and vague or very hopeless and nothing to do about it kind of setting and flow. You should try to reach and remain on a level between the two. Furthermore, avoid turning the plot into a childish conflict as well. Take the gundam series as an example. Their conflicts are pretty much like this: i dont like you, i dont like you either. hey he shot at me, now i will take revenge and kill your whole family. Now i will kill your whole country and all in it......Etc. And what was the cause to all that? Oh yea....the other man looked different from the man living on earth, that was all. The earthling never tried to talk with the foreigner or anything. Even later into the conflict both sides refused to understand the reasons to the war and each others and just went on. Later, when the war ended with a winning side, peace is there for a while. 50 years afterwards a new war begins, about the same as the previous one.....
The character designs are good. It do seem like you put most effort drawing the cat girl and the other girl to the right. Sure, the males arent bad in comparison and the two dudes on the left are the most interesting to observe when it comes to their gender group.
There is another area for concern here from what i can see. The cat lady in the middle and the guy to her left have pretty big heads with their hair included. Nearly too big, but dont seem out of place though. When comparing them to your previous art you tend to draw characters with large heads and the sizes ,change now and then and may end up as smaller and more normal in some cases. With that in mind it appears that you overdid it slightly this time despite your drawing habit. You should watch out so you don't draw tremendously tall and out of place looking heads in the future.
If we go deeper into the way you colored most things and the lines you draw in the page, it seem as you intentionally made everything to seem old, worn out/rough and unpleasant somehow. Evidence for that claim are the extra lines here and there, much shading and the quality of the edges vary in straightness and coloring just a tiny bit without looking rushed.
The composition of the front page with many smaller squares is good. The main character of the page is in the middle and is not too big and the page is not too small. The smaller squares may seem a bit messy placed at first but if you read from left to the right and go down you see how they are connected. As if several people take part in the plot, different elements in it and with various thoughts and ideas set in motion.
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:iconmajorvoltage:
MajorVoltage Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011
Sexy :3
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:iconsea-salt:
Sea-Salt Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
But I'm not into furries!...

*looks at pic*

Goddammit, I'm a liar...
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:iconddt87:
DDT87 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
For some reason she looks to me like a sexy humanoid and genderswapped deviant-fella.

Cool! XD
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:iconscifijackrabbit:
SCIFIJACKRABBIT Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2011  Student Artist
innittt XD thanks

~ JaQ
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:iconddt87:
DDT87 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome! XD
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:iconnebelstern:
Nebelstern Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2011   Digital Artist
uuuh, cool pic ! ^^
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:iconscifijackrabbit:
SCIFIJACKRABBIT Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2011  Student Artist
Thankss! ;P

~ jaQ
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:iconmeperson94:
meperson94 Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2011
And who doesn't like buxom catgirls? Dead people. That's who.
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:iconscifijackrabbit:
SCIFIJACKRABBIT Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2011  Student Artist
Hehe thanks gald you like her! ^w^ :heart: If you think shes buxom you should see my panda chick XD [link] [link] ;P

~ JaQ
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:iconmeperson94:
meperson94 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2011
Will do!
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:iconsonicfan200000:
Sonicfan200000 Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2011
hello puty cat hehe
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:iconlars777:
LARS777 Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2011
Awesome job,man :thumbsup:
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:iconscifijackrabbit:
SCIFIJACKRABBIT Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2011  Student Artist
Thanks ^w^

~ JaQ
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:iconlars777:
LARS777 Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2011
Np ;)
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:iconangelhero4:
AngelHero4 Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2011   Artist
What the heck's keeping her breasts up that high? I must know.
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:iconscifijackrabbit:
SCIFIJACKRABBIT Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2011  Student Artist
nothing shes ment to be "in motion" like running or sumthin.. I have no fucking idea XD ...its pretty fail

~ JaQ
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:iconangelhero4:
AngelHero4 Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2011   Artist
Well there you go, in motion. That works for me. Believable. Thanks for the reply.
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:iconcat-gray-and-me78:
cat-gray-and-me78 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2011  Student General Artist
:iconmegustaplz:
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:iconeclipseproductionnx3:
EclipseProductionnX3 Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
gorgeous :D
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:iconnarcotize-nagini:
Narcotize-Nagini Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
she's my fave character of yours, I"m totally drawing her XD those delicious curves!!!
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:iconscifijackrabbit:
SCIFIJACKRABBIT Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2011  Student Artist
yaaaay! ^w^ ide love that! :heart: and thanks!

~ jaQ
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:iconnarcotize-nagini:
Narcotize-Nagini Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
your welcome X333 lol since you like my art as well for my smexy girls
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:iconscifijackrabbit:
SCIFIJACKRABBIT Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2011  Student Artist
yeah! I dig those hips and thighs XD :heart:

~ JaQ
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Narcotize-Nagini Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
XDD lol
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Omnoproxyl337 Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ohhh so sexyyyyyy <3
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:iconscifijackrabbit:
SCIFIJACKRABBIT Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2011  Student Artist
haha thanks man :D

~ JaQ
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:iconomnoproxyl337:
Omnoproxyl337 Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
hey no problem mate <P
your stuff is off th charts on epic
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Pikachu84 Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
Boobrastic XD
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:iconngeohp:
Ngeohp Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
I put 1 of ur character in my pic
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:iconscifijackrabbit:
SCIFIJACKRABBIT Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2011  Student Artist
oooh nice ^w^ link?

and thanks ;P

~ JaQ
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:iconngeohp:
Ngeohp Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
[link]
u will like it.
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