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.: I got you! :. by SCIFIJACKRABBIT .: I got you! :. by SCIFIJACKRABBIT
Art, concept and Characters Jack Stevenson (CJRFM) 2012

Art Jack Stevenson 2012

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Been a while seen I done a yuri "femalexfemale" thing :3

tried a kinda chubby'ish, loli'ish chibi'ish style with this one

Just avin a bit of fun before Uni workload kicks in =w='''

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Comments, faves and crits are appreciated very much!!
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:iconluna-kitsunema:
I like the way you have drawn your characters. The facial expressions are quite funny,especially for the orange/yellow one (Sorry I'm not familliar with your character's names). The grey one's face is quite cute. The only thing I see that looks a tad off is the tail on the orange one,I think its up a bit to high. I think it should be below the tattoo. I would have loved to have seen a fully done bacground,but the way your characters are drawn make up for that. Over all I think this is a pretty good piece of work. Keep it up.
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Critique by SalamiAsami Oct 4, 2012, 6:38:07 PM
Wow. This is amazing. But in sayin' that, you know I have to point out some of the obvious flaws. ~<3

I don't know the names, but the yellow chick. She has a horn coming out of her back. I know it's suppose to be the tail, but you can still move it down to the proper place. It's alright if the tattoo is covered up. It's gonna be covered up. always remember, anatomy first before body art.
The fishnet stockings needs to be thicker or at least coloured in, like make it a shade darker so that we can tell its over her leg, because it looks like move body art. Also, you forgot to put it on the bottom of her foot and toes.
On her shirt, it should gather a little around the elbow if it is loose. It has a real 2D feel to it and doesn't look like it's wrapping around her arm at all. Looks like it is more a part of her than just clothing.

The other chick is fine.

The artwork is real dirty. Needs to be cleaned up a little more.

Other than those few little things, this is actually quite amazing. One of the best (and by far the cutest) one you did so far in my honest opinion. I know you say they look chibi-ish, but I don't see the different between this piece and your other pieces as far as chibi goes.

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Vision, I thought this was personally thought out beautifully and you captured it PERFECTLY on paper.

Originality also deserves some praise. If you was to do this piece of her hugging her boobs instead of butt, I would have given this no starts at all. Boobs are so overrated now. It's nice to see some butt praise.

Technique... I already explained what was wrong so 2.5 stars here.

The impact was tremendous. It sticks out, it's different. It's unique and totally you. 5 stars.
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guerillaman135 Nov 24, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Got any advice on drawing thick girls ;3
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o0Lonegamer0o Oct 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
ha,  then again she left herself open, but still ha
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NicksFluffyShit Jul 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
So cute! :D :la: choir 
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Nice.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                 Love 
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:icon70nywuvschizuru:
I like this very much. You and a few other artists are one of the reasons why i try experimenting with furry and anthro.
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SCIFIJACKRABBIT May 14, 2013  Student Artist
Sweet! and thanks >w<
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cfruge444 Apr 11, 2013
Just so you know, the account of the 2nd person who critiqued this has been deactivated.
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SCIFIJACKRABBIT Apr 12, 2013  Student Artist
I know :3
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