Well the first thing I have to say is that this is really awesome, it's feels dark like Britain at night, the colour really feels like she alone on a train but it also feels like she nervous but calm. She so sweet listening to music. The texture fits very well in the setting of the darkness but in all I think this one great art piece you have made its cute but it shows that anyone that sexy or kinky is an normal person inside and I'm glad you share this with us all so keep it up mate.^^
As much as I've seen Luna in a more naughty light, it's good to see her in a more natural state. I wouldn't say the blur tool was overused, but the lights outside the bus were a bit too glaring along with Luna's moon pendant in her hair. Also, I can say the detail you put into her clothes and the checker pattern on the seats seemed a little more defined than what I've seen from your previous Luna art pieces. All in all, I'd give this an 8 out of 10. I can see the effort you put into all of your work, but sometimes there is such a thing as trying too hard. I hope I'm not being too harsh, but keep up the good work.
I can see the effort you put into all of your work, but sometimes there is such a thing as trying too hard.
I hope I'm not being too harsh, but keep up the good work.
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