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~ S is for Safe ~ by SCIFIJACKRABBIT ~ S is for Safe ~ by SCIFIJACKRABBIT
Art, concept and Characters © Jack Stevenson SCIFIJACKRABBIT 2014

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Part of my series on london Slang ABC's. Watercolour and photoshop

"YOU... YOU WOT M8!? ARE U NICKIN MY CHIPIES!?!!!" *bark*

Bloody seagulls 

yes they are called CHIPS. NOT FRIES

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~ C is for Chav ~ by SCIFIJACKRABBIT~ D is for Drum n' Bass ~ by SCIFIJACKRABBIT~ K is for Kotch ~ by SCIFIJACKRABBIT~ J is for Junglist ~ by SCIFIJACKRABBIT~ E for Endz and F for Fam ~ by SCIFIJACKRABBIT

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I always found you to be one of the most obviously inspired individuals. You've got fun/ny ideas and clear influence from your environment or at least the environment you're most fluent with.

You've got a "grungy cleanliness" to your work. It's not 100% refined, but it's charming and works well with the atmosphere you present. It's a rare trait that many (me included) can't really incorporate and feel looks unprofessional when we try. Works more for you since it's subtle.

There's also some nice consistency in the back menu. The restaurant seems to have it's own theme and it's very adorably drawn.

The one thing I could suggest improving is your shadows. It is clear that you enjoy cartoony minimal shading most of the time, but a few hard shadows in specific areas will help create some depth and form while keeping it simple at the same time. Nothing fancy, but certain things like a drop shadow under Sam's arm, the condiments, and the box of fries. Little touches to define spacial relationships. There's a lot of...floating going on at the table. But it's nice that certain things are behind and underneath so that's also a step in the right direction.

I would touch on anatomy, but as I said, you enjoy a cartoony appeal so it's not too big an issue with this one in particular.

I really like this alphabet project you've got going. I really hope more people learn to appreciate your other ideas like this as well as your pin-up material.
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The-Midnight-Aurora Featured By Owner May 23, 2014
His puppy dog eyes... will they fail or succeed to recover his lost, yet coveted, salty, deep fried snack?
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SCIFIJACKRABBIT Featured By Owner May 23, 2014  Student Artist
Haha! Seagulls don't give a fuck xD
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Afanasi-Wolf Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Chips, fires, potato slices, either way their delicious...
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SCIFIJACKRABBIT Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2014  Student Artist
indeed
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KristinaStoud Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2014
if all peter's gonna do is cry about it, i guess samuel really is safe to steal food from him

it's neat to see you draw a bird character, i like the way you handle them.
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SCIFIJACKRABBIT Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2014  Student Artist
thanks ;P
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DEMON-FOX-96 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014   Traditional Artist
Man peter pug, I though you's was a thug.
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SCIFIJACKRABBIT Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014  Student Artist
hes a fucking wasteman lol
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Dark-Lemur Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014
MINE
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SCIFIJACKRABBIT Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014  Student Artist
xD
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