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Art, concept and Characters Jack Stevenson (CJRFM) 2012

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[[UPDATE: Decided to crop the animation like a cheeky bastard because the Shoulders/Hands were annoying me... solved the puzzle of the mysterious disapearing button below the cleavage so thats good. also attempted to fix the jiggling hair... to little avail... hmmm.. sorry to all who liked the other version. Better hoped you saved it xD]]

Pretty much my first attempt at serious animation... in ages xD

This was originally intended to be a redraw of [link] but ended up as something different altogether. Just a bit of fun mind you lol! Experimenting with the animation side of photoshop!

I think you need some new PJ's Lune :heart: just saying >//w//>

Anyway Hope you like it!

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Comments, faves and crits are appreciated very much!!
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:iconsunnycat17:
Even though this isn't the best, this is still a very nice animation, and despite it being heavily flawed...you can't help but watch it over and over.
I like how you did a great job on moving the patterns along with the...uh. sudden unbuttoning.
The shading is very nice, forgetting the animation, it's still well done.
Not much to say, since noting out all the flaws here would be like beating a dead horse. ^^;
The background, however, does seem uncleaned, you can see the messiness in the paper change by how many frames there are as the animation goes.
That's really all I have to say. I still really love this animation, and could watch it ALL day. :meow:
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Critique by SalamiAsami Sep 28, 2012, 1:34:16 PM
It started out nice, then ended in a belly flop in the pool.

I don't know how many times I've seen this type of animation with the girl and her over-sized boobs poppin' out of her shirt. I'll admit, I never seen a panda chick do it though, so I gotta give you some credit for that. :)

Shoulder placement. Unless she just mystically pumped steroids, her shoulders shouldn't rise that much when her arms are perfectly still and in the same position.
Also, she has VERY broad shoulders for a girl which make her look man-ish. If it wasn't for the boobs, people would think she was a man.

The collar. It grew down to her boobs which is physically impossible unless you're some sort of clothes wizard. Lol

Her boobs. To show that they are being pressed together in an uncomfortable shirt, you could draw them more squished together and with some winkles. You just drew to beach balls together and made them bounce.
To make it even more effective, you can draw the boobs overlapping the shirt to show that they are just too big for it.

Hair. It just sits there on her boobs that are moving. That is some stiff ass hair gel. If you animate the boobs, you gotta animate EVERYTHING that is touching the boobs. This includes the hair.

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All in all, I think this had A LOT of potential. It was just the lack of execution, anatomy and frame work that made it sink a little. Keep up the good work and PRACTICE. :)
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bob342511 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2015
can we get a full version a full undone shirt one ;)?
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TheLastRebelSoldier Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Nice
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thekamikazemonkeys00 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
cool pic :D
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:iconscifijackrabbit:
SCIFIJACKRABBIT Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2015  Student Artist
thanks
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:iconthekamikazemonkeys00:
thekamikazemonkeys00 Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
youre welcome :D
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SSWORKSHOP Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2014  Professional General Artist
Nice Panda beebws
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:iconneverett5:
neverett5 Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
I can relate to this I hate it when this happens to me.

nice animation tho~
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:iconscifijackrabbit:
SCIFIJACKRABBIT Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2014  Student Artist
im intrigued now x//D 

and thanks ;P
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AzepHybrid Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
how did you make this though I would love to know :)
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:iconscifijackrabbit:
SCIFIJACKRABBIT Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2014  Student Artist
photoshop
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:iconazephybrid:
AzepHybrid Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
BOOBIES!!!! Hmmmm.... :smirky:  I likie :3
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:iconscifijackrabbit:
SCIFIJACKRABBIT Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2014  Student Artist
im glad ;P
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:iconsergiroth:
Sergiroth Featured By Owner May 13, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Dem pillowboobs. 3
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:iconscifijackrabbit:
SCIFIJACKRABBIT Featured By Owner May 13, 2014  Student Artist
;P
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:iconstudio-kyru:
Studio-Kyru Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
lol!
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:iconscifijackrabbit:
SCIFIJACKRABBIT Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014  Student Artist
;P
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:iconstudio-kyru:
Studio-Kyru Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
;)
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:iconaries-90:
ARIES-90 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014
great!
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:iconscifijackrabbit:
SCIFIJACKRABBIT Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014  Student Artist
;P
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robpsp Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014
when look at it its like something familiar i seen somewhere can't quit put my finger on it i like itNeko Emoji-05 (Rolling) Neko Emoji-05 (Rolling) 
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darkdragon67 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2013  Student Digital Artist
amazing Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart :happybounce: 
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:iconhypertiz:
HYPERTiZ Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2013  Student General Artist
LOL Boob Power ACTIVATE!
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:iconscifijackrabbit:
SCIFIJACKRABBIT Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2013  Student Artist
pretty much xD
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:iconavak55:
AVAK55 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2013  Professional General Artist
this might sound perverted but,.....................jiggle jiggle....LOLS
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:iconscifijackrabbit:
SCIFIJACKRABBIT Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2013  Student Artist
:P
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Talongrasp Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2013  Student General Artist
:icondeadpoolplz:: Hey f***face, why don't you comment on this? Because this girl is...HAWT!!!

(NOTE: That wasn't me, blame my alter-ego, Xalton for being a Deadpool noob.
:icondeadpoolplz:: You better watch it, buddy. Otherwise, we's gonna have us little talk, got it?!
Me: Okay, okay! Sheesh!!! -_-")
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LargeFG777 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013
I know this comes pretty late, but I will just get that off me... That "critique" from Extremepestilence(LOLBANNED)... Are the dA admins even aware that their critique system is actually used by pieces of shit like him? Just look at what he wrote... this is so bullshit, it is not even funny.
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HYPERTiZ Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2013  Student General Artist
yep... i know its their opion BUT seriously its ART and if they find that disgusting why isnt murder and decapitations of people in their art? (ok unless the artist is in a horrible mood but yeah) 
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jak55 Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2013
POP!! goes the weasel!!Giggle 
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:iconscifijackrabbit:
SCIFIJACKRABBIT Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2013  Student Artist
haha
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:iconchakattailswisher:
ChakatTailswisher Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
This is amazingly cute for something so sexy. XD

I don't suppose you do requests or art trades? I'd LOVE to get one this done for my fursona! ^^
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:iconscifijackrabbit:
SCIFIJACKRABBIT Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2013  Student Artist
Thankyou!! and sorry I don;t do either anymore =u=''  

commissions will be open soon though
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:iconchakattailswisher:
ChakatTailswisher Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Ah, I see. :-( Unfortunately, I'm in-between jobs at the moment so I'm quite broke. >.< So commissions are out of the question for the time being.
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:iconscifijackrabbit:
SCIFIJACKRABBIT Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013  Student Artist
thats alright :3
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:iconpepsigala:
PepsiGala Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013
:iconpervydeadpoolplz: DISOFNDOSIFNOIN Bewbiez.
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:iconscifijackrabbit:
SCIFIJACKRABBIT Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013  Student Artist
xD
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trollzor619 Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
:iconpervydeadpoolplz: BOOBIES!!!!
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:iconscifijackrabbit:
SCIFIJACKRABBIT Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2013  Student Artist
yeeee!
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:icontrollzor619:
trollzor619 Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
:D
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:iconoddiee:
Oddiee Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This...this is good
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:iconscifijackrabbit:
SCIFIJACKRABBIT Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013  Student Artist
thanks!
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menolothar Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2013
Poor buttons never stood a chance! Lovely!!
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:iconscifijackrabbit:
SCIFIJACKRABBIT Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013  Student Artist
xD
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Tharock1 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
The last button owo
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:iconscifijackrabbit:
SCIFIJACKRABBIT Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013  Student Artist
hha
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RileyKong Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2013
O/////O ALMOST ALMOST AAAALMOST!!!
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:iconscifijackrabbit:
SCIFIJACKRABBIT Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2013  Student Artist
:P
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RileyKong Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2013
blast you, last button for having such strong constitution!
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WolfHunner Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Hobbyist
I'm curious, how many sheets of paper did you use?
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:iconscifijackrabbit:
SCIFIJACKRABBIT Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Student Artist
cant remember now... i think 11, 12 summin :3
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